Poem By David Taylor

One moment in time
all this is begun

One moment in time
a sound is sung

One moment in time
a life is born

One moment in time
a hope is torn

One moment in time
love has come

One moment in time
all is known as One.

Comments about *simplicity

The title of your poem is perfect and appropriate, completing the unity of the subject and maintaining its brevity. Beautiful. This is art.10++++
As simple as that of a moment's happenings...great
I've always loved couplets. This is a fine, aerien poem.

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