DG (9/19/1963 / )

Sisters Abyss....896

HER veins were full of rust and
corrosion, her eyes held pictures
of the past, black and white.
HER body capsized in a tub full
of sharks,
STILL she is brave, .
STILL she is strong.
HER mind starts to struggle,
her thoughts start to shout,
STILL she is brave,
STILL she is strong.

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Comments (3)

David, the emotion in this jumps off the page...
reading this makes my toes go all tingly and i want to hurry from the bath with my rubber ducky Warm regards allan
Hi David, don't 'say' Brave and Strong.' Show' it with images in the verses. You have a good workable image here- 'In a tub full of sharks'..