Sliced By Knife @!
fear dosen't show
for fate that will follow
it dosent know.
by .Pd. is here
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31 Jan 2007 10:19
i totally agree with jasjiv............ a clever one nice work my vote 10 peace jibin
18 Sep 2006 05:51
i loved the start, but then it changed in the end. a killer's mind would work the same way i thought. cleverly averted.
Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr
01 Sep 2006 01:20
AHHH...what a cleveruty of verse, young lady...You play the game so well....tease & please....nice work Preets! ''''''''''''''FJR
24 Aug 2006 10:42
I love this. It's perfectly everyday, turned into something special!
22 Aug 2006 11:57
the ending was good then i looked down and it got even better. enjoyed this
22 Aug 2006 02:25
Once Eve had given the entire apple to Adam and see what had happened..... LOLz..... You are truly amazing and have a beautiful frame of mind. The simple things that you write on makes you a very special poet..... I had once said this earlier...You write like an angel!
20 Aug 2006 11:16
i do...thanks...love...nalini...you forgot about the name on the ebook...LOL