DG (9/19/1963 / )

Sluggish

THE thunder went bang,
the bang went bark, the
smoke begane to scream,
the scream started to laugh,
and in came, me, me.

THE blast went gone,
the gone went west,
or was that south,
and in came me, me, ,

theres a absence here,
a way out, or a way in,
the first door to the left,
thats right, no the other
left, and in walks me, me

THE scene shifts, and out
walks me, me....

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Comments (2)

David, I like the element of confusion and how you've found yourself in the middle of it all. Really interesting... well done! ! Brian
CHANGE OF POEM STRUCTURE...AND I LIKE IT...MAKES FOR EASIER READING...NICE PENNING, DAVID'''''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK/FJR