Poem Hunter
Something More
(19/12/93 / Sonepur, ODISHA< INDIA)

Something More


The regards and disregards
Seems alike to my ears
Except those
Which are from deepest core.

All attempts are valueless
Till the heart starts
attempting for the same.

May be my eyes
Can see more than they like
Sometime eagerness
Sometimes saturation
But still they are awaken
To see something more.

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Comments (4)

Hello poet friend Tadasha, I really enjoyed your poem and especially the ending was rather awakening and powerful, Loyd
Thanks for sharing your thoughts and your heart with us Tadasha.
A beautiful poem Tadasha and thanks for your comment.
But still they are awakened to see something more. Very nice expression. Excellent work shred. May God bless you Tadasha. Keep on writing.