AH (6-7-92 / kentucky)

Somewhat Melancholy

Retire your spirit
in soulful daydream.
cleanse your conscience
and corrode the atmosphere
with empty thoughts.
the night was invented
for those who seek darkness.
the dawn is the awakening.
your mind is your sanctuary.

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'A very nice poem this turned to be... No typo's were detected or seen by me. Another tip for the ryming verse... Is reading of many poems by different writers, in turn this will make your style real good and not much to be worse. Another tip is to use the right word for the right meaning... This will in turn bring back a much better recieved proper screening.' Good poem, God bless and best wishes-Mike Gale.