AC (12-16-1981 DOD: everyday / )

The Fly

God in his wisdom made the fly
And then forgot to tell us why.

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Comments (5)

yes amberlee.....somewhere something keeps happening....the earth is such a happening place! ! ! ! live it! it is now!
wow. you've been writing some really impressive poems lately. i absolutely love the objective approach of this piece; writing about connected external events vs. internal emotional conflict, yet still retaining the emotion in each described vignette. simply fantastic. Jake
I am so impressed with your poetry, Amberlee. You have an intelligent yet breezy style which is very original. I hope you submit your poems to a publisher. You deserve a broader audience.
truly beautiful and amazing poem! ! !
Very beautiful indeed. Nice work Amberlee.