You Are Beyond Redeemable

You are beyond redeemable,
And can not be saved.
If your point of view is limited...
To values you had,
Existing in isolation.
Those days of self praise are gone.

by Lawrence S. Pertillar

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In the previous Sonnet had been set forth the thought that poetical eulogy and embellishment can add nothing to perfect truth and beauty. They are to be regarded rather as injurious. The thought here presented is essentially the same. And the concluding lines furnish an excuse for the poet's previous silence.
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.............love the theme and the rhyme...so beautifully written..
For limited by words are we To draw in verse such symetry And words imperfect, soiled by man Cannot true beauty understand