Short Descriptive Poem

flames of a fury deep inside
this hellish monster i stand beside
ten foot tall with firey eyes
deep within awaits a deadly supprise

marching on
side by side
show no fear
theres nowhere to hide

angels and demons
one on one
who will win
this war of sin

by shaun znideric

Comments (11)

A sonnet well written to soothe the child of woe!
A great nature poem rich in rhyme and rhythm and it is meaningful too. Thanks for sharing it here.
admired by Coleridge. See my poem 'Mrs Robinson'
The meter is broken in the closing couplet.....Probably a transcription error. Really beautiful Sonnet.
Like Susan I also wondered about these bold capitalized letters. Seems to take the flow away of otherwise beautiful and reflective poem.
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