Spider's Bite Senryu

It hurts too much

like the bite of a spider;

your last goodbye

by Kostas Lagos

Comments (3)

Donne's poem The Flea is about a flea biting humans, thus commingling the blood of several persons in the flea itself.
Kostas, this poem reminds me of something John Donne would write. It's pretty powerful. Donne has written a poem called The Flea, I believe, concerning a flea's bite. Dennis
A great short write. The bite of the spider depicts the pain and hurt.10