Electricity

Before i begin let me warn u that I did not get an opinion before posting this poem. Therefore, I don't like it. But i hope you enjoy anyways :)

Find a way to make me happy
By telling me that you love me
by letting me love you
by letting me feel you
touch you
breathe you in
Make my insides scream
But make me too shy to speak
Let me lean into you
let me feel your warmth, your softness
your gentle touch
and let me hold your hands
the ones that give me a shock of electricity
with every squeeze
and every gentle caress
never leave me
just hold me
and let me sleep in your arms tonight
And then shock me
with your intense
Electricity

xox
Dedicated :) once again

by Isabelle Cote

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Emotional feeling
Unbelievably bad. A child of eight could do better. All that is famous is not neccessarily quality. We must never be afraid to be critical, or we will never learn,
Spring the king. Let us welcome spring. I like this poem. I invite you to read my poems and comment.
Anyone with good knowledge of poetry please help: ..fields breathe sweet. Is that an example of personification or not? ? Please help. Would like to hear from you.
Anyone with good knowledge of poetry please help: fields breathe sweet - is that an example of personification or not? ?
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