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Stars? Meteorites?
LL ( / Riga)

Stars? Meteorites?

At times…
there are moments that
one absolutely naked.

Those moments breathe us
like the smoke
a smoker inhales
So… irretrievably.

Then, the exhalation process
that lasts, maybe for
a moment
or, for the time limit
that can be expanded

Those are moments
that breathe us like
A fire-person struggles thru smoke
of a collapsing building.

To behold the face
of one other,
A moment when beholding
becomes life and breath.

A star, falling,
fulfils a wish, or maybe
is but a meteorite.

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Comments (2)

Breath-taking and - true.
Nice - very nice indeed