Fogotten Popcorn

Just think of all the
Forgotten poems
Created in the space
Of one computer booting up.

The mind-speech races
To erase itself in white
Lines of static streams, much
Like the snow of popcorn
Crushed under theater seats.

by Writer Entraining

Comments (46)

The flower, scattered The leaves, old The riverbed, iced You not yet appeared... Joy with happiness...waiting
The wind, heavy The fog, hazy The coral, reddened I'm coming in sincerity ......beautiful
Like a sheeny canary I sing an easy ballad Sing your name repeatedly Along the road you passed..beautiful poem dear poet.
This poem is now three years old, and it still resonates strongly for me. When I read it in the past year or so I didn't leave a comment because that theme of faithful but futile waiting for someone was so much my present experience.Now I'm liberated from that waiting which is another name for hope, and can appreciate this poem for the consolation its lovely language shares with everyone.
It is a marvellous poem on Love having captivating and edifying diction. I feel deep love on... Like a sheeny canary I sing an easy ballad Sing your name repeatedly Along the road you passed. Thanks for sharing.
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