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** Stop Killing Your Own **

Twinkling stars reflection
On the blue ocean
Have become the nuts and bolts
Of vessels plying their way to destination
Bright colorful lightning
Unwittingly exhaling
The breath of infinite horizon
Giving a sensible life to boredom
Orchestra of thunders astonishingly unleash
The music of Mozart and Beethoven
Bullying the weakened hearts to a standstill
The crews and the captain were stunned
In the middle of nowhere
They’ve witnessed the rhythm of enormous blue waters
The sparkling of bluer space above
Ransacking their minds in believing
Shouldn’t the world be as calm as these?
There’s life everywhere
The planktons and corals
And Nemos were dancing
Harmoniously in the crystal clear waters
Attracting billions other species of the sea
Maneuvering the vastness of living
Beauties of dry land
Is no match to the lucrative wet world?
Mankind is brighter
Killing each other were no better
We‘re killing our own
Send them to the ocean
To appreciate the creation
How I wish they were there

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When you mentioned in your poem, Nemo, are you referring to the cartoon character finding Nemo?
Amen. Cheers. Subroto
stop killing ur own coz it will destroy yourself... stop killing ur own coz it will affect human resources.... stop killing ur own and peace will remain.... STOP..! ! ! DONT KILL UR OWN.. I READ MANY TIMES THS POEM BUT SEEMS ITS MYSTERIOUS TO ME EVEN I CUD USE THE 24 HOURS OF READING STILL REMAINS NOT CLEAR TO ME. SO I HVE TO BE HONEST TO GIVE MY COMMENT TO THS PIECE HONEY, ITS ONLY THE TITLE I READ.... I DINT LOOK AT THE WORDS U WRITE I DINT COUNT HOW MANY LINES U MAKE I DINT CARE F U PUT COMMAS OR PERIODS THE TITLE ITSELF SATISFIES ME.. THS POEM S REALLY FANTASTIC..before i came, there r 82 visitors already so, , , cheers hon, , , ths s a good work done by a good poet, , , its u am talking about......smile....lav ya..
YUSOF, LET THIS POEM BE THE MESSAGE FOR THE NEW YEAR - 2009! A MESSAGE FOR ALL THOSE WHO BELIEVE IN MANKIND! Kindly read my - ' The Big Bad Wolf ', with a similar message! BEST WISHES FOR THE NEW YEAR - 2009! -RAJ NANDY
Wow, this is beautiful, a very nice portrayal and I love the wording.
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