Suicide

Poem By Scarred Unknown

i'm going to run away
i'm leaving this world
for all it has never done

i'm leaving this world
for all it never did
never seemed to care
never showed me love
never showed me joy
never gave me hope

i'm leaving this world
all it gave is pain
and regret
it let me make mistakes
like any normal person
yet i'd go home
and it would throw a knife
straight to my heart

i'm leaving this world
for all it never did
never seemed to care
never showed me love
never showed me joy
never gave me hope

i'm leaving this world
all it gave was pain
all it gave was hate
all it gave was death
i won't be here tomorrow
i won't make it another day
i can't take this pain
i'm tired of feeling numb
the feeling of no feeling
i'm tired of the pain
i long for that feeling
the trusting
the love
the joy
the hope
but no it takes it away
locked inside a box
must keep it away

i'm leaving this world
for all it never did
and all it never gave

Comments about Suicide

great poem, sends a srtong message of giving up and helplessness. sounds almost like it could be a song, or like maybe a music video with narration in the background....ANYWAYS good job! !
Great repetition and interesting content, the poem seems as if written at razor blade point.
It seems as if eveyday, suicide grows closer to our minds. As if it grows like a disease spreading to our lungs then our hearts, our minds then our souls. If only there was a way out. But it seems as if nothing will ever drag us out of this hole called suicide
i thought this is wat the world is exactly like so i mean it rings home u know i have been there


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That go through my head
As I lie in bed
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whether i wanted you or not
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To Be Found.

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Just walking down the hall.
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In movies is where we all see this feeling of love and feeling of dreams. I see it there it seems so pleasant, it seems as if walking on air. I see in movies the love we dream of, and think to myself why can I not have it? Why can I not feel it? I long for it, as if love is all that exists to make me happy to make me feel.
We watch in their eyes and see so much life. We see that there is none but the one in front of them. We think we can have it, that love in front of us. We think that it is real, the love in front of us. There is no such, that love on the screen. There is no such thing as true love.

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All i ever wanted
Was love from someone true
All i ever needed
Was someone to hold and care for me