Sun

moving all the time
lovely sun
no matter, feels happy
still moving

by abdul razaq Click to read full poem

Comments (7)

There is no doubt now, that we have a philosopher in our midst now. GW62
masallah akhi keep it up inshallah!
i like the poem.. it contain the hope for everyone to live. :)
I like the poem. keep writing
Refreshingly ra ra ra! ! ! ! I have a baby niece and family in PM... I hope the stars will guide me to visit one day soon.
A lovely write abdul, you clearly identify the true qualities of the sun. I know that English is not your mother tongue, never-the-less you did a great job, I enjoyed the read Abdul, thankyou.
Abdul-Your poem is very nice. I think you can learn to write poetry, if you will pay close attention to it, and make corrections. I enjoyed your poem. kat I am sending you a message, too