PR (6/3/1996 / Rajkot)

Sun And Planet

You are the Sun,
And i am Planet.
From years to years,
I am roaming around
Round and round.

Sometimes i am close.
Sometimes far far away.

You are the reason.
Why i have seasons.
Sunny summer is my strength
Windy winter is my weakness.

You have given a day.
You have given a way.
You have hold me with endless force from countless time.
People call it gravity.
I call it love.

Yes, My love

You are the Sun,
And i am Planet.

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Comments (25)

fab! ! ! Beautifully woven words! !
It's a beautiful poem of love and attachment..nice to read for the second time..10 Rini
Rich flow of thoughts in good rendition of words. Beautiful and very passionate love poem elegantly brought forth from the heart. Lovely work of art. Thanks for sharing Pratik.
You have given a day.You have given the way.Nice lines.Thanks for sharing.1o
pratik, in this piece as in your water poem, you show good poetic instincts. in both you use images that are familiar and, therefore, accessible. which reminds me of hafez the great sufi mystic, one of my favorite poets, whom i know only through the english renderings of daniel ladinsky. -glen
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