Sun Day

Poem By Eric Elliott

Sun-day school is a place I hate and your love i appreciate
with fear in my mind and love in kind
I try to find a place I left behind
but to my love you were blind
slowly it will disappate
untill all thats left is my hate
I turn to God to save my soul
and hope that new events will unfold

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i love that poem alot


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