Tanka - Life ~ Life

Poem By M. Asim Nehal

Isn't this life is like
this frozen ice on the leaves,
it will fall drop by drop
like our age
leaving everything behind.

Comments about Tanka - Life ~ Life

Stupendous Tanka nothing else can be said about it.
Excellent it will fall drop by drop like our age leaving everything behind.
Ages! ! ! Leaving everything behind. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
These icy leaves are really very interesting leaves and you have truly enriched this poem with beautiful words. An excellent poem is well penned.10


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