Tanka: Ufo

Lenticular cloud

hovers over

Mt.Baker

Ancient Aliens

arrive in a saucer

by Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

Comments (3)

i don't 'know' Tanka, but i do know that i like this poem. of course i like cereal and milk in MY saucers, aliens-optional. to MyPoemList. bri :) p.s. to get UFO in title, try editing by typing U F O, not UFO. it may look funny, but that's how i do it.
oh, NOW you leave a Poet's Note.............after i looked up the damn word! ok, the PN was probably there already. : ( ....................but this says more....and less than your Note: adjective: lenticular 1. shaped like a lentil, especially by being biconvex. lenticular lenses 2. relating to the lens of the eye [i never would have guessed! ] - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - (to be continued) ..................
The title is suppose to correct to: UFO.. I tried 3 times to get it corrected..