Grudge

Why am I still holding a grudge?
This feeling inside me just won't budge.
Why won't it go?
It's making me feel so low.
I'm not as angry as I used to be,
Yet, still I am not free,
Of the grudge I have against you.
There's just nothing I can do,
To be rid of this grudge,
That from my mind, won't budge.

by Colette Grosvenor

Comments (2)

Excellent themes, use shorter lines unless you want very free verse, since about teachings maybe more discipline in meter. countered with playful meters, not much ABABA form if so? ? ?
Excellent thoughts, just make the flow smoother and cut out a, an, and the's etc to trucate but sont stilt