Poem By Deepak Amembal

The light drizzle
Does little to help
Lift the gloom
But settles the dust
Raised by
Unwanted thoughts.

Comments about Tears

Powerful, beautiful, and so true. Thank you.
So true! like all your poems it was short but still very powerful...
Deepak must mean deep thinker, you thought about this, i love short pieces of art Warm regards AJS
This is very good, Deepak. I enjoyed it very much. Short, sweet, and to the point, so the sad feelings shine through to the reader. Warmest regards, CJ

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