Tears In The Rain
I look above
Hot tears kiss my face
The sky is crying
Stars are out of sight
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Fathima Midha K.M
07 Feb 2018 07:03
Fantastically I'ke! I also got second prize on writing poem about OUR COUNTRY, INDIA on the school competition. So I congrats the poet Aislemyth.
26 Jun 2007 09:22
Well, you have love in you which is really good to show in poetry. Your poetry was fun to read. TAKE CARE! ! !
25 Apr 2007 03:35
wow. that is a enigmatic poem i have come across. i have also come across such feeling but never had so imaginary like you. keep it up up my good friend, good writing. please read my poems at www.poemhunter.com/ravi-chandran i will be very grateful if you comment about the poem. thank you
09 Sep 2006 05:04
this is a sad and deep but very good poem, hope to read more of your poems Samual Harriso (Australia)
30 Sep 2005 04:28
that is such a good poem! it's rly deep. nice peom tho i like it alot check out some of mine sometime
15 Aug 2005 08:15
aww that's so sad. But I love this poem! Lylyanna
12 Apr 2005 12:54
sad theme...i like it..miss the comfort in bein sad.