Temptation

Alone in the darkness my true fate lies
Where evil rules and hatred never dies
The trick he uses is sweet temptation
But the price to pay is eternal damnation

by Evy Moore Click to read full poem

Comments about Temptation

Nicole Kelley 12 Sep 2006 05:05
Evy, this is a wonderful...me and you have alot in common...keep on writing....
Leo Lopes 11 Sep 2006 11:21
Another cool poem if i may say so myself ;) 'Alone in the darkness my true fate lies where evil rules and hatred never dies' I can see you think similar to me ...And you know what they say.......... Great minds think alike
Daniel Nairn 11 Sep 2006 10:29
One of your best poems, definitely...
Patricia Gale 11 Sep 2006 05:30
Fantastic lines... the venom.. evil rules and heatred never dies..... such deep from so few words.
David Gerardino 11 Sep 2006 04:12
He gave me the venom and gave me the knife, great line..............
Dee Daffodil 11 Sep 2006 08:43
Get thee behind me Satan...and push.... You certainly have a way with words, this one is dark and moody. Seems to be a common theme here. Dee