GIG (.... / No1 knows)

That Poor Child

She's been abandoned,
she's been abused,
in so many different ways.
Yet she wants to find love,
feels she needs a friend,
still longing for the day.
One minute she's a cruel one,
quite hard to get along with.
Then the next she's a sweet heart,
wondering what it'd be like to be kissed.
You'd see her once and she's angry,
at no one in particular.
Then, twice, and she's crying
wondering why no one likes her.
She's never been hugged,
or ever told that she's preety.
She's forced to suck it up,
and hold it all in.
Oh dear, what a pitty.
She seems to do nothing right.
Always, she feels alone.
She never goes to sleep at night,
not even happy in her own home.
No one she trusts
yet no one she hates..
she just wants to be accepted.
It's always been this way,
so why bother,
she's just not easily adapted.


written by me....and..eh...a friend(andrea)
nice work on your first attempt.

User Rating: 5,0 / 5 ( 6 votes ) 7

Comments (7)

This is a beautiful piece. So many women have been through this, and still haven't let it cross thier lips. Really great poem you have here, your a really great poet! ~ Hazel G.E
This poem is no less than spectacular, Ive felt and have watched so many otheres feel exactly what you have written that its a wonder we havent found eacher other yet, you are truley an amazing poet
I love the pain involved in this so much dark emotions I love it keep up the great work doom
i really like this poem it leaves a lot of questions unanswered. keep it up 10+
i like this poem a LOT! ! ! i especially like the way its wriiten in a combination of broken phrases and complete sentances. shows the pain and suffering of that poor child.....me likeses muches.
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