The Bees And Me

from 'While Passing Through'/Summer

Bees on Russian Sage—
me sweeping ground beneath them—
it's this dance we do.

by Glen Kappy

Comments (4)

Glen, i really found this Haiku very humorous. i can imagine you dancing with a broom. The poor insects beneath your broom! ha, ha, ha -the duet!
I love this - how you discovered what you're doing, what they're doing, both separate are suddenly one common activity in your flash of perception. This is the magic and the swiftness of haiku. and myself the faraway reader. I too am pulled into this moment of unity.
Short and sweet! ! Loved it.
using a few words you have expressed so many things, nice poem thanks for sharing