The Big Rock (Revised)
When I was small,
I had it all.
Beaches to explore,
Trees to climb,
by Dee Daffodil
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09 Feb 2007 03:42
You took this reader right to that rock, had him fishing there with you and looking down in to the sea. Evocative and picturesque writing. Great work. jim xx
19 Oct 2006 05:48
This is an excellent poem Dee. You have a real affinity with the child's view of the world and an ability to translate it for the rest of us. Well structured and not over-worded. Fine work. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxx
Mpho Petrus Manwedi
25 Sep 2006 01:41
Wow! this reminds me of the mountain I so loved to climb back home in Lesotho, I used to call it my rock of ages. Thank you again for taking me back to those days with this good poem.
09 Aug 2006 11:41
It kinda reminds me of how little kids love to play in empty cardboard boxes...a wonderful piece yet again. Eni da kid :)
Preeti - is here!
13 Jul 2006 02:17
wow..glad u told me to read this one....it's wonderful.... Preets
03 Jul 2006 10:42
you know what Dee, if you look at that big rock now...you will see how small a rock it really is...but as a child that was the universe...love...nalini
23 Jun 2006 08:49
This one rocks! Wonderful poem Dee. Warmest wishes, Justine
13 Jun 2006 11:59
Ahhhh... and the heat they throw off later in the day when the sun is fading is like a mother's loving hug. -chuck
09 Jun 2006 01:09
One of my most beautiful experiences was climbing Ben Nevis in Scotland, The views were unspeakably wonderful, the eye drawn into the distance and such a peace all around, Thankyou for this great poem and thankyou also for the lovely memories Love Duncan X
09 Jun 2006 01:14
I love big rocks dee, the bigger the better, hahahahahaha and fishing poles nice, , , , catch anything? Love dave xxxx
Tara very irritated with PH injustice
08 Jun 2006 02:47
A solid rock of a piece... stirs reminiscences. You're a relaxing read in the morning DD!