Tree's Appeal

For your peaceful living
whole body I give.
It pains, if my full age,
you don’t let me live.

I live to see you living
in lovely atmosphere.
We can create heavens
caring for each other.


Comments (3)

wow....deep poem but i like it
This poem has a musk that lingers in the air after the last words have been read. Emotional and stirring - you're really growing as a poet, Matt.
I hesitated to place a number...a vote on this poem. It's emotionally sad, yet telling.