The Further You Go

Poem By Anadi Finnish

The further you go, the world
becomes dark, and even,
blank, I see. The
further you go, the more you seek,
the more you expect and you start
giving up.
Time slows your brain, time kills you
slowly, softly. What a cruel life it is, in which we,
Who live, must die and have an end, so dark.
The end seems dark and it's so near.
Remember the men time killed? A man killed by time.
So will you be,
And so will I.

Comments about The Further You Go

further you go, the more you seek, the more you expect and you start giving up. Time slows your brain, time kills you. rules of life learned from experience. a very fine poem dear poetess. tony
Wonderful concept Anadi very well written, im going to give more of 'my time' and read more of your poetry, Great write!
Beautiful philosophical piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely brought forth with insight. With passage of time everything will pass away. Lovely poem written with conviction. Thanks for sharing Anadi and welcome to Poemhunter.


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