~~i Wish... I Hope...~~

i know
that someday
someone
will be there

i know
that one day
true love
will find me

i hope
in that day
you'll be
there with me

i hope
that it's you
who will
stay wih me

i wish
that it's you
who will
stand by me

i wish
it'll be you
to care
and love me

until
my last day
i hope
to see you

until
my last hour
i wish
to hold you

until
my last breath
i want
to love you...

by Julia Pascual

Comments (5)

roses and hollyhocks, the silver pods of lupine, sweet-tasting phlox, grey lavender...this is nicely palpable and pleasingly at odds with expectation. Lovely piece.
This poem tempts me to write a poem on my fence. I can relate to these thoughts in so many ways. Really a pleasant read.
very prettily written and the closure is perfectly done- -archetype of the world always a step beyond the world, that can't be looked for, only as the eye wanders, found. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - taking the poem out of the state of ere prettiness into a more thought-provoking realm
I discovered the colours! ! Nice piece of work.
A beautifully conceived meaningful and thought provoking poem portraying the wear and tear caused by the nature on the bricks of the compound wall of a garden. It may have some spiritual shade too. Thanks for sharing.10 points.