The Good Human

Poem By Hasmukh Amathalal

I look back
And stake
The heavenly joy
That you offered to enjoy

You were like an angel
To be so simple woman
In life for the events to shape
And remain with me till death

God only knows
And throw
Some light
On past to delight

I have cried
The tears have dried
For many nights
I was feeling not alright

Your rejection
Was no end of relation?
I adopted each word
As an ornament and looked forward

I shall carry it till end
You were and may remain as friend
I was never a stranger
But good human sans anger

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