To Enjoy Each Other

i wake up hearing music from a tree
my feathered friends singing for me
i open window still dark for my eyes
i was enjoying it; i let time flies
clouds teasing skirts of far horizon
i then realized i'm standing all alone

i begin to remember few hours ago
i'm sound asleep dreaming of you
i have a grin; i close my lips
i rather not say it's for keeps
but i'm thinking what we should do
can we run away a day or maybe two

by Manonton Dalan

Comments (9)

Like a black panther from the caves of sleep. ......... ......... Time's river winds in foaming centuries Its changing, swift, irrevocable course To far off and incalculable seas; Beautiful lines of great poetry. 10+++
This poem is luxuriating in beautiful poetic lines - - - - - - - - - ] Time's river winds in foaming centuries Its changing, swift, irrevocable course - - - - - - - - - - ]She folds her tawny heifers and her sheep On lonely meadows when the daylight ends, - - - - - - - - - - -]In tattered robes that hoard a glittering trace Of bygone colours, broidered to the knee, Lovely lines aren't they?
The rustic beauty and the 'lithe tiger's sinuous majesty' embodied in the gypsy girl is just amazing. The use of metaphor in the last stanza adds to the charm of the poetic expression.
What a poem! ! Any one would appreciate. Perhaps that is why you were called the Nightingale of India. Thank you dear poetess.
Fascinating poem, full of mystery. Very thought-provoking. I like it.
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