The Last Piece

My apology
to those I have caused pain
to those my artificial popularity affects them
to those who thought that it's unfair and cheating

I'm sorry
I never meant to hurt anyone
I didn't intend to
I didn't want to

It doesn't matter
if I'm not the best
if I'm not part of the top 500 poets
if my poems are not in the top 500

It count much
my writing improvement
your critiques on my poems
the friends that I've met here

My heartfelt thanks
for your constructive criticism
for the poetry knowledge you've shared
for sharing your poems

Thank you
for your inspiring messages
for your kindness
for your warm friendship

Poets and Friends
thank you and I'm sorry!
for sure I'll miss your friendship...

21st June 2009

by Jazlle D. H.

Comments (17)

Have a wonderful journey and we are all awaiting your return to this poetic oasis as early with the coming of the newly decorated humming birds.
to those my artificial popularity affects them to those who thought that it's unfair and cheating... i too was victim of same.. i fought it out with challenge and proved to the task m 4th now... good write...10 read mine.. it deeply hurts me.... can i reach on the top? .... miss i miss u, mary to marry..
heartfelt sadly and great penned.. felt your warm feelings through those stunning words.. keep on my sweet poet.. hazem al..
thank you for your poem. it is full of humility. keep writing and congratulations!
A writer should never have the last piece for he and she holds the intellect power of the populations. A unique theme written in an apologatic manner conveyed the softness core of your heart......10/10
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