Love Me With Care

The muse of life,
Treat me with respect and love me with care;
For, i am a lovely person who will always like to be beside you.

The muse of love,
To adhere to your request and to be with you;
But, treat me with respect and love me with care.

Liaise, is, as, sea, sail;
Revealed!
But, with the muse of love in the land of the living.

Here, there, sphere, were, mere;
With the muse of your signature on this love!
But, treat me with respect and love me with care.

by Edward Kofi Louis

Comments (5)

I see that PH has not fixed the errors I mentioned in my earlier comment last June.
a bit of updating and it'd be a great poem to hook a kid on verse
I prefer the reading of The Leprechaun's Ball.
A fanciful tale and interesting to read, but whoever typed it into Poem Hunter made a couple of spacing mistakes: catch TH ETINY clamour so we MAKEA shoe Will PH ever fix it? Do they ever read these comments? It was last edited on 29 June 2012. Let's see if they will fix it now (or not) .
onomatopoeia galore and the sounds are so clear the leprechaun or the shoemaker Either which is dear