The Lost Cause

Lost words.
Lost cares.

Lost memories.
Lost smiles.

Lost tears.
Lost feelings.

Lost worries.
Lost bliss.

Forever I will be your,
Lost cause.

by Amber Green

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clear, concise - and deadly sharp. Gorgeous <3
Your poem has nine lost's in it. If you turn it around you have nine starting points or destinations which make you look at the sources of the words conected to your 'losses'. Words must be explored in their depths. Write another poem. It could turn out you will write about your findings which give a clearer representation of your voice/soul. I'm wondering if the source of your poem is your mother. Tell me if I'm wrong. Keep playing. The song will come. It will cry out of your soul.*
It seems that the poet knows the Meaning and Feeling of loosing someone that was way too dear... Its Just a pin prick but straight to the heart...
sweetness!
Amber, so much said in so few words. You definitely stuck the ending... really well done! Brian
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