Seldom Do We Attain Love (Bussokusekika)

Seldom Do We Attain Love (Bussokusekika)

Your elusive dawn
That which your heart desires
Have you achieved it
All of us have desires
Our hearts ache and yearn with them
Seldom do we attain love

P.s.And if by chance we do obtain love...We are truly blessed...hehehe

. 10/18/2016

by Edwin Tanguma

Comments (3)

Beautiful poem. you have captured very well a silent cry of despair. Beautiful way you have presented the poor boy being scolded and punished by the master. Concluding lines goes well with the poem I saw, a pair of wistful eyes That would never shine; The face, I recognized! It was mine! These pain one could feel in self......Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing.
Beautiful poem. you have captured very well a silent cry of despair. Beautiful way you have presented the poor boy being scolded and punished by the master. Concluding lines goes well with the poem I saw, a pair of wistful eyes That would never shine; The face, I recognized! It was mine! These pain one could feel in self......Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing.
Watching from back tears rolling down, . but I offered a thunderbolt touch, very wonderful writing with nice imagery. Very beautiful poem really.