The Murder Of Humanity

Once there lived two friends,
human and humanity.
human was loving and caring,
while humanity spread peace and brotherhood.

by Arfa Iris Click to read full poem

Comments (8)

i agree with Mohd. Akmal Nazir, in full. Humans are Gods creation, humanity is in His Hand. We are who we are......But be sure of this.....God is Just.......All will be seen......On that Great Day. no one will get away but your respect for your fellow, has shone though the poem
Pace. Truly, humanity is murdered, but hope is not lost. AWESOME poem, kind madam: D
well composed one...keep it up! !
Friend you have made use of nice metaphor and narration technique is curious and enchanting. Nice poem.
Although I do not perceive things as well as most who read this, mostly due to my aging, in my opinion I say the poem is very well written. If I were to choose my favorite part, I wouldn't know which to choose because I liked the entire thing.
As the story developes thought developes...simple yet deep write...loved it Dear! plz read some of my new poems.thanks
The universe is still alive by dint of humanity. Come what way, howsoever adverse the circumtances may be, humanity cannot be murdered. If it is ignored at one place, it is embraced at another. If only a single 'MOMIN', I mean the person who is entirely human with his faith, is alive on earth, God will never send doom. I think your poem is an outcome of your fair sentiments towards humanity. By the way, I loved the piece though I have some reservations. But your love towards humanity will definitely receive 10 marks. Take care Akmal
But is it not murder was part of humanity for thousands years past. It was but a need control that made murder wrong. Civilized is the name of the control, for how many would really think twice about killing someone if the laws of those ties didn't exist. Caveman, Tribes killed foreign and wide. This was but a precursor to the things we now call hate and greed. If only out necessity, would you, could you, should you? Nobody ever really knows till they face it as ghost of evil thoughts and demands. Good poem, hope you like my thoughts on the subject. This is definitely going in my favorites.