(01/09/1989 / Worcester, MA)

Prickly Pear Cactus (Haiku)

Prickly pear cactus,
Yellow blossoms in the wild.
Beauty, shelter, food.

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Comments (5)

He will come back after being surfeited somewhere else. Till then have peaceful days!
A nice poem to read again and again. Cheers!
I was inspired by the title. I used it to write another poem. please read. 'The true Poet' by: Michael Micmac Mccrory I feel the pain in your poem. you should get at one with titles. A good title can inspire better poetry and vice versa.
good poem...when this kind of thoughts start bothering you....means you are walking on the right path...all d best...for coming storms
This was very good. Just some nit-picks. I think the line would be better as: A car food money. Instead of separate. Also, 'with everything advance I make.' I think you meant to leave out 'thing' from 'everything.' But I gave this a good rating.