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The Right Approach

Do you recall that tiger at the zoo?
We tried so hard to make him look our way.
You whstled; but I said, 'It doesn't do
To whistle at a tiger. You should pay
Him more respect! ' Do you remember that
He moved one furry ear a fraction when
I called out, 'Hello, Tiger... ', as a cat
Will grant remote acknowledgement to men
Who recognise their place, 'You're beautiful, '
I breathed, '... so beautiful... ' his massive head
Turned slowly and two regal eyes blinked full
Agreement straight at mine. It could be said
That he was captive and that we were free,
But I was captured when he looked at me.

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Comments (4)

How does one really define 'freedom? ' Excellent composition!
Fine captivating composition! nice imagery! ......10+++
oh it is amazing words nice poem and so beautiful. well done
Oh wow. Sometimes the proper response to a poem is awed silence, but a blank message wouldn't show up! Keep writing! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !