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The Rising Sun
CN (09-05-96 / england)

The Rising Sun

Poem By carrie nnn

the sun is bright and made of fire,
people say you shouldn't look at it.
but what about when it sets and rises?
it's so beautiful, i just cant help myself.

i get up early every morning
just to see this wonderful light,

the rising sun is fascinating,
it's wonderful, fabulous it's the most beautiful thing
iv'e ever seen.

you have to be mad not to like it,
completely crazy, out of your mind.

the rising sun is hypnotizing,
truly amazing,
its the most beautiful thing i've ever seen.

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