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The Rose
GS (March 1960 / Essex England)

The Rose

Poem By Gabriel SimpsonLaw

I said your lips were like the rose
I said I liked the tilt of your nose
You said you’d be mine 'til all hell froze
Sure must have been a cold winter

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Comments (1)

i loved it. it had this pictue-esq relationship. then it suddenly hit you. this ended. and with the rhyme scheme a-a-a-b, it hit you on a non rhyme. perfect