( / Cuttack, Odisha)

The Silvery Touch

Moonlit night
dawn approaching
darkness fading out
the cool gentle breeze
with shining moonbeams
myself watching the moon
from my roof top
ohh...what a pleasant sensation
every part of my body
bathed in the moonlight
I was the recipient of joy
in the silent night:
Great is the creation of the Almighty.

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Comments (79)

Richard, Juan-austin, Rubana, Bipasha, Rajesh, Kumarmani, Anil, Savita, Chandan, Roussel, Fran, Bharati, Rini, Geeta, Petals, Dillip, Sylvia, Mahtab, Ruta..........I don't find any suitable adjectives to express my thanks to all of you for the excellent appreciation shown to my poem. This particular poem was based on my actual experience in watching the moon after midnight at my roof top. I can very well infer that an actual experience can create superior poetry.
There is indeed a spiritual feeling when looking at the moon! Being at one with the universe! Kishore, Congratulations on Poem Of The Day!
A beautiful poem that captures the beauty and wonders of the moon. Great imagery.10+++
Moon boon is well known to us, it has reflects here in this poem, great poem
Absolutely serene. Congratulations for being selected as the poem of the day.
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