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The Struggle Of A Flower
FZ (01/06/1989 / England, U.K)

The Struggle Of A Flower

So the day began with rain,
Thrown down in tantrums of tears.
I could only watch, in vain,
The struggle of a flower.

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a short on words poem that it certainly not short in deep symbolic meaning. a extrememly welled penned peice that cuts straight to the point. great poem my friend. as always, you have shown you are a wonderful poet my friend.10+++ Jen
Short but says so much 10 Lynda
wow, short but a nice piece well done luwi
terse verse that packs a punch
Feelingly penned poem. Tears are the distilled wisdom, the essence of the struggle for existence. CP
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