The Sun Has Burst The Sky

The sun has burst the sky
Because I love you
And the river its banks.

by Jenny Joseph Click to read full poem

Comments about The Sun Has Burst The Sky

Yiyan Han 01 Dec 08:49
The people walk in the street and laugh I love you And far down the river ships sound their hooters Crazy with joy because I love you. - Envious actions are depicted.
Gordon Walter 21 Nov 11:47
Yes love can make anything happen.
Khairul Ahsan 21 Nov 10:55
When a heat is in love, the eyes see beauty all around, the ears hear a cuckoo's cooing from all directions. Congratulations on your poem being chosen as 'The Modern Poem Of The Day'!
love rocks 21 Nov 10:27
I love you too becaus I love you
Mahtab Bangalee 21 Nov 09:45
The sun has burst the sky Because I love you And the river its banks.//// everything of the world is wonderful and wondering me everywhere because I love you; the feeling of love is very mysterious where lover always feels strange something; sometime this live puzzles the mind of lover; beautiful poem penned
Dr Tony Brahmin 21 Nov 08:18
The people walk in the street and laugh I love you And far down the river ships sound their hooters Crazy with joy because I love you. The theme of love
Rajnish Manga 21 Nov 09:44
That's the beauty of love. World seems so much affiliated to love when we are in love with somebody. Thanks a lot.
Savita Tyagi 21 Nov 08:05
It’s a beautiful poem but didn’t we see it on front page just a few weeks back. I am sure there are many worthy poets and poems that Poemhunter can bring to light by providing space on its front page rather than using repetitions so often.
Kumarmani Mahakul 21 Nov 12:27
The sea laps the great rocks and acquires the rivers and sun bursts the sky with golden rays. Love is reflected in all regards. An excellent poem is well penned.
Shreya Hacks 07 Nov 11:26
Wow. Superb love poem.
Mahtab Bangalee 07 Nov 09:55
The blackbird fills the air Because I love you With spring and lawns and shadows falling on lawns. /// it's a beautiful poem within romantic feelings; yes; when someone falls in love then it seems that the world is beautiful, fascinated exotic looking the surrounding; yes; everywhere it seems the birds flying, rivers tranquil flowing, mild breeze blowing, sweet drizzling shedding; it's all thru because of love you//
Love Rocky 07 Nov 02:23
Love you too Everything happens for love
Edward Kofi Louis 07 Nov 01:41
True love is stronger than anything! ! ! ! ! 🥰 Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Sylvia Frances Chan 07 Nov 01:13
CONGRATULATIONS being chosen as The Modern Poem Of The Day, Mrs. Jenny Poetess. Amazing award for your wonderful poem. Please, write more poems.
Sylvia Frances Chan 07 Nov 01:09
When love is in you, all seem so wonderous, the most impossible things can happen. Love is a wonderful element especially to use that in poems, The sea laps the great rocks Because I love you...WOW! Most beautifully said, I like this poem so much, since love is my favourite subject in poems. Mrs. Jenny Poetess, a magnificent poem is this! 5 Stars Full Vote. WHY have you shared only two poems?
Deluke Muwanigwa 07 Nov 05:21
Beautiful unconditional love. That which flows in thunder, lightning or rain.
Dr Tony Brahmin 29 May 12:34
The people walk in the street and laugh I love you And far down the river ships sound their hooters Crazy with joy because I love you... All, because I love you. the inner feelings of love and how it influences our way of seeing.. tony
Tamara Beryl Latham 02 Apr 05:57
Sounds like love to me. The reader is able to visualize your heart. Thanks for sharing. Best,
Jasbir Chatterjee 02 Apr 10:20
Nice poem. Love seen everywhere in everything... Congrats on being poet of the day!
Anil Kumar Panda 02 Apr 08:43
Love is expressed at all places at all times. Very nicely done with because I love you getting repeated frequently. Loved it. Thanks for sharing and congrats.