**************the Touch**********************1979

i looked up into the deep blue sky
little white clouds were floating by
i looked upon this young girls face
she held it down in disgrace.

i looked upon her cheeks so fair
she looked up to me to see if i care
i looked at her with content
and she knew right there it was heaven sent.

she smiled at me, and our eyes then touched
we knew then, it was much to much.
our hearts entwined and her lips met mine
we felt right there it was a love divine.

by louis rams

Comments (7)

Into the deep blue sky! With the muse of love. Thanks for sharing.
Romance is alive and well in this fine lyric write.Take care. Warm regards, Sandra
from clouds white to clouds nine...romantic piece...gracious presentation...i liked...10
‘…we felt right there it was a love divine…’ Rhapsodic state reached…and final culmination what we pine for… Thanks for sharing… Ten Ms. Nivedita UK
she smiled at me, and our eyes then touched we knew then, it was much to much. our hearts entwined and her lips met mine we felt right there it was a love divine...it is unique divine touch and happens to only few gifted individuals with pure heart... lovely poem with very good message in it... i love it.....10 read mine anywhere..bbutterflies around and colour
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