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The Untamed

It was a dark night, she smouldered

With the mysterious lure

Of the unknown, the untamed

Playing hide and seek with my emotions

I watched fascinated by her distant beauty

A radiant calm grace that drew emotions beyond words

I stood gazing at the full moon

Or, was she, watching me?

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Comments (4)

'Playing hide and seek with my emotions'... a beautiful poetic phrase associated with the moon imagery there...the word 'smoulder' effectively qualifying the hide and seek play...i enjoyed this write... poem ten grade
it's strange how we Imbue the moon with romantic and emotional powers, after all it's just a rock in space, poets make it sound like a Wondrous place... Anita such a great write... Andrew 10
Great write. I like the line about playing hide and seek with your emotions...very clever. Is that a reference about the moon being covered by the passing clouds and then reappearing throughout the night...or did I misinterpret it? Either way its intriguing. Top marks! -Michael
Anita, well written piece with a great deal of mystery.10/10 Ian