The Wedding

i wake up early dawn
to witness the changes in sky
from darkness to morn
for a new bride tonight..

by lady grace Click to read full poem

Comments (73)

for all those days of confusions my hours filled with loneliness all i see is his perfect love a true love which is always the best... great write 10+++++++++++++++++++++++
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lady grace i love your poem...
so nice one i read it keep it up and do some good poems on love and lust
Fantastic
Beautiful very beautiful poem.....
Well happy annivery indeed... good write
wake up early dawn to witness the changes in sky from darkness to morning light for a new bride tonight..yes and reminds of olden days and sweet memeories to be cherished.... lovely poems with clear hear and feelings....10
not only the hearts screwed up
you simply make magic in writing.....so vividly narrates..and you had all the hearts screwed up................ salu.
You are already a star, grace, what if we comment or not, still the joy of reading this piece was immense.10
A beautiful poem. I wonder how many thousands of poems are already written on the subject of love. But this haunting piece (with a touch of feeling similar to 'Wuthering Heights') with contrasting imagery and an unexpected ending convinces me that beautiful poems can still be written by a highly creative mind.
A great poem where in the human emotions are expressed with out any inhibitions. Kudos.
I celebrate my fiftieth wedding anniversay on th 20th of this month.Sometimes marriage is very hard.
The end of the story surprise me in sadness, it's like a real piece which i saw with my own eyes, tks for sharing
it is beautifully written....earlier it looked a dream but you told it is real, at morning.....at the end it shaked me....omg.... leaving movie like imprint on my imagery.... great.
You Know I never write a poem keeping in my mind the rules of litrature, Like you I always write what my heart says, its really gud meet a person who writes in same way.Very touching poem, flow of time is like that only, we cant realise how much time is being spent How much we love a person, until and unless time of departure comes.
You Know I never write a poem keeping in my mind the rules of litrature, Like you I always write what my heart says, its really gud meet a person who writes in same way.Very touching poem, flow of time is like that only, we cant realise how much time is being spent How much we love a person, until and unless time of departure comes.
oh my gosh... wow... if this is real I am sooo sorry its beyound words can tell you. this left me speachless. ~MC~
This is a good poem. However whereas i did understand the message behind the poem, the flow of the poem was a little confusing. Think there were also a few issues with regard to diction.