Poem Hunter
Poems
Thinking
AW ( / )

Thinking

destroy this
keep it deep inside
press it in
let it hide
the room fades
come again
be forgiven
hold my sin
wander down
to a happy place
keep to living
smiley face
old friends lieing
me still crying
keep away
till I start dying
no care
no thought
or judgment coming
until I thought
we could be something
still gone today
breathing harsh
a bleach bathtub
doesn’t cover that much
wait for time
to pass us by
and stop a second
to see it fly
ill be back
don’t worry dear
watch again
and keep me near

User Rating: 5,0 / 5 ( 3 votes ) 1

Comments (1)

You're an amazing writer. This poem goes along with Nirvana song by the way (wasn't paying attention to which song though) . I like this poem, your none concrete layout. Also the ambiguity of 'old friends lieing'. Your writing is not shit, compared to mine, it's the Holy Grail of poetry!