Cayce

Cayce

she is…
Cute

Alluring

Yielding

Comforting

Excitable

and so much more!

by Loyd C. Taylor, Sr.

Comments (2)

Of course; the big, big problem here is the last verse. It would really improve the whole thing if you just took it out completely a put something else in it's place. I'm sure, whatever it was you put in ; would improve it. The other verses, by the way, were excellant.
Wouldnt it have been great to be snoopy though, I like it, nice tempo.