VR (17th September 1990 / )

Tick Tock...Tick Tock...Tick Tock

Watching the clock…
Tick tick tick…
I pass this life by…
Watching the clock…
Tick tick tick….
The precious moments fade to grey…
Watching the clock…
Tick tick tick….
We wait to die…
Watching the clock…
Tick tick tick…
What happens when time runs out…?
Tick…tick…

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Comments (4)

Very depth kept om short way
Loved it....and read it again just to make sure I had taken it in.
I really like your peom. can i say a suggestion. **only a kind suggestion** for the different ticks it could be like this 1 tick tock tick 2 tock tick tock 3 tick tock tick 4 tock tick tock 5 tick..tick...
wind it up? ..............................: -)